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I lived my life in a state of bliss
Never knowing I was missing out on any of this
My ignorance consumed me
I never knew what was outside waiting for me

You entered my life and took me away
You spent every minute of every day
Showing me what was outside
What my ignorance was trying to hide

You showed me happiness and joy
I never thought I would feel this way about a boy
I wish you could have stayed
We could have ran and played

We both knew you would have to go
We both tried not to let the pain show
But when you left me sitting alone
In the moonlight my tears shone

I found myself envying my old self
Wanting to return to that blissful ignorance
At the same time, knowing I'll never be the same

As the days went by I was able to move past the pain
And be happy that we were able to share that happiness
I grew able to take joy in the knowlage that you'd be back
And that we would again feel that way
©2008-2009 *CelestialJade121
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I wrote this for *RawEm0tion's weekly theme.
I'm not sure how well it fits the theme but it's the best I could come up with.

My insperation to write this was my boyfriend flying out here to see me and than having to fly back home. It was great having him here and I can't wait for him to come back :).
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This is pretty cute, but again, pay attention to punctuation. :D

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... And those who were seen to be dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music. Friedrich Nietzsche

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